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Simple Truth

Author: Oracle
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I was feeling mundane, and wanted some love, so show me some love ya'll...
Actually pyrestarter made me write this...
He wrote a very emotion piece that made me think of the pain and misery that is caused and how we all share that pain.....

I think I would prefer less comments on this piece, but sharing.. that would be very cool

If you have something to share, go on and leave it..

Then someone will bleed for you...

Simple Truth

It is good to bleed for others in their pain, because someday, someone will have to bleed for you-
Oracle 2004

Submitted on 2004-06-11 22:07:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  You can have my jacket or my food, but leave my blood alone. There is one who gave his and that will suffice. Not for now, forever. I know, this is not what you meant, but that's where I went with it OK?
| Posted on 2004-06-15 00:00:00 | by Lelik | [ Reply to This ]
  Oracle, I have not only read simple truth, but felt it. This is, in fact, the simplest of truths, isn't it? Unfortunatly, there comes a time when there is no blood left to spill--nothing left to give...this is the time that you lie curled up in a ball on the floor rocking yourself, hoping and praying and begging that maybe, maybe somebody will help you, someone will bleed for you as you've bled for so many. More often than not, though, that someone never comes along and we are left carcasses of our former selves. You say that you wanted some love, well, you have mine, because you are one of the few people in this lifetime that can be taken at face value, that can be respected and trusted, you are one of the few who would bleed for me as I have bled for you. Thank you.
| Posted on 2004-06-13 00:00:00 | by pyrestarter | [ Reply to This ]
  thanks for sharing this thought as it is so true my neighboring new yorker. some day i will stop bleeding pleading and suffering my own demons,others pain and the worlds incompitence
paulie d
| Posted on 2004-06-11 00:00:00 | by paulie d | [ Reply to This ]

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