I don't know about this one. It seems to be just on the edge of being finished. Maybe some revising? But I dont see anything wrong with it, in fact it kinda makes me want you a lot, lol.
That was a little odd and embarrassing...
excuse me, but I have lust for those who write well.
You take my mind somewhere else, and thats exactly what I need right about now.
So what I was meaning to ask you is...
Is that picture you or something you found on the internet somewhere? Just wondering..
wow again i am at a loss for words. i love the way you just roll words out on a page and it works out in a way that tickles the senses and doesnt completely make sense. i love how surreal everything seems. your skill is unmatched these days. keep writing!