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    dots Submission Name: Keys To My Heartdots
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    Author: kession
    ASL Info:    18~M~ok
    Elite Ratio:    3.16 - 115/156/63
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsKeys To My Heartdots
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    I've Messed up,
    Quite a few times,
    I've made you mad,
    I've caused you to cry.

    You don't trust me,
    You don't trust guys,
    But I'll show you you can,
    It will just take time.

    I truly love you,
    And I hope you can see,
    You have not only my heart,
    But also the key.

    You make me feel good,
    Inside and out,
    You're the one I want to be with,
    I love you without a doubt.

    I hope you can forgive me,
    For my mistakes in the past,
    I'll be a better boyfriend,
    And do whatever it takes to make us last.




    Submitted on 2007-04-11 21:15:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is so precious and so forgiving.
    it's good to read something from you again.
    <3
    | Posted on 2007-04-12 00:00:00 | by BleedingTears | [ Reply to This ]


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