I really like this.
Ive never been able to write an un-rhyming poem.
If that's even a word.
So i really envy those that can write such poems, and still make it work, with the right rhythm and amount of syllables to make it sound good.
Hey this is good. very good. But I hope this is fiction, even the part about suicide. I don't think that I have ever been in love or should I say been in a love that would bring be to that point.
No one is ever worth killing yourself over.
This is pretty f'n good!!!! I can relate completely to this write, except for the suicide, (I don't believe in killing myself) but it does fit perfectly into this piece. I feel the emotion because I have been there and it sucks! I definately dig this and will more than likely fav it 2.