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    dots Submission Name: better than me??dots
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    Author: ladiesplanet1
    ASL Info:    23.cali baby
    Elite Ratio:    3.58 - 720/463/165
    Words: 47
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 371
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 298



    Description:
       just to remind you that im better than you


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    dotsbetter than me??dots
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    do you really believe
    that you're better than me
    because if you do
    then you have no clue
    i am the best
    because i passed the test
    so dont even try
    to tell one more lie
    about how you're cool
    cuz you're just a fool




    Submitted on 2007-04-12 13:52:20     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Short but to the point - sounds like this is about a man and maybe one that didn't treat you as good as you know you should?

    Tis ok to toot your own horn sometimes and know your own worth!

    love,peace,joy&smiles to share
    tif
    | Posted on 2007-04-19 00:00:00 | by Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      I personally think it should be longer. ><;; But that's just me, seeing as how I prefer things that keep me entertained for a long time. I don't really know what you would add to it, but It's too short for my personal liking. Sorry <.<
    | Posted on 2007-04-12 00:00:00 | by Ryu Saiashi | [ Reply to This ]
      And I thought guys had ego's.
    If you were a guy, a dude, a Man.
    then I could see you beating your chest.
    Or do Women that too? I dunno...
    I like the poem.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2007-04-12 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]


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