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    dots Submission Name: Geometics (what is that)dots

    Author: Agent V.
    ASL Info:    23/girl/small town
    Elite Ratio:    7.23 - 38/29/24
    Words: 136
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       An elixir that will always call us home. Together; forever.

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    dotsGeometics (what is that)dots

    To counteract this high
    is a genetic obstacle
    but to live on the boundary of something superficial
    [dancing with stars, swimming with the dead]
    I love, I love...
    the grasp, not firm but just enough to stay steady.

    I follow the path most erased
    so I may be solo enough to remain
    easy enough to go back or maybe
    just enough
    to wander with voices ignored by some
    one hoping to enable another mindset
    less complicated, more intense.

    All too easily I idle
    scared of the punctuating end
    of you, of I, of everything this world combined for us
    and together we mingle in the shadows
    of that which is bright and optimistic
    amorous for a taste,
    an elixir that will always call us home.
    [lifelines depending on reception
    homes existing only in hearts.]

    Submitted on 2007-04-12 15:34:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      'All too easily I idle'

    i like that so much i took it and changed it around and used it as my own. you rock.
    | Posted on 2007-04-15 00:00:00 | by HappyBuddaH | [ Reply to This ]

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