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    dots Submission Name: Toke it Up, Live it Up.dots
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    Author: DrkRomeo_sGirl
    ASL Info:    16/f/somewhere in my mind
    Elite Ratio:    2.97 - 77/75/26
    Words: 182
    Class/Type: Rant/Angry
    Total Views: 1152
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1133



    Description:
       im having surgery next week and it really pisses me off, b/c i dont want to. I was in so much pain, and was on pain medication, and these few words just fell out.

    hope you enjoy.


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    dotsToke it Up, Live it Up.dots
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    Sometime, my life feels like a sinking hole.
    Tormenting soul, never was my goal.
    This shit gets old.

    Makes me want to toke so bad,
    Choke........... so sad.

    Go back to my Emo ways.....
    Cut again, watch the blood turn from red to gray.

    No tears.

    No tears come from these darkened eyes,
    Someone as messed up as me never cries.

    Im the Pixie of the night.
    Fairy dust, shattered heart,
    Showing me the light , Living it Up,
    Putting up a struggling fight.

    Roll a blunt, Smoke it Up, Toke it Up, Choke it Up.

    Blurr my eyes,
    Blood pouring down my thighs.
    Pierce my leg, feel the pain ,
    Watch the blood go down the drain.
    Live it Up , go insane.

    Insanity is in my own mind.
    Anorexia, my own kind.
    Bulemia, throw it up.
    Lose the weight, then Live it Up.

    Who am I, no one cares.
    so might as well
    Give it Up
    Toke it Up
    Choke it Up
    Live it Up.

    SCREW IT UP!




    Submitted on 2007-04-14 11:58:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      and hope the surgery goes gued! guedluck!
    | Posted on 2007-04-14 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]
      loved this actually. But dont want u to go bac to bad habbits, i mean i wouldnt-and havent...yet, so keep it strong, and as u say LIVE IT UP! dont SCREW IT UP! have a g'day!
    ~*Alexis*~
    | Posted on 2007-04-14 00:00:00 | by darkwiccan14 | [ Reply to This ]
      um.... what?
    | Posted on 2007-04-14 00:00:00 | by HappyBuddaH | [ Reply to This ]


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