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Author: darkwiccan14
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Carol-some name that kinda rhymed with girl..i dunno u have to hear me say it to get how it rhymes xD i have a weird voice lol


Yes I am a weird girl,
I guess I'm the only one,
Who makes no goddamn sense,
In this whole-wide world.

Yes I'm not as pretty as can be,
But I make you see for who I am,
(which is well...ME!)
And what I will always be.

Yes I am the strange one,
The one whole will enjoy life,
And succeed while having fun.

Yes I am a weird girl,
I guess I'm the only one,
Who listens and learns,
And talks to Carol (no offense carol)

So now you know me,
And you know how...
Weird I may be,
But nothing will ever,
Stop me,
From being...

Submitted on 2007-04-14 15:37:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  I like it. I hate it when people try to change themselves to fit other. Good write
| Posted on 2007-05-04 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]

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