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    dots Submission Name: alonedots
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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Alone
    Total Views: 695
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 549



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    dotsalonedots
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    to be alone

    your afraid

    to be alone

    you stay still and wait

    to be alone

    with nobody to protect you

    to be alone

    you feel vulnerable

    to be alone

    fearing you could die

    to be alone

    cuz your living a lie

    to be alone

    its your fault i left you

    your all alone

    cuz i chose not to be your fool




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