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Submission Name: hatred dots

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Author:	Thief
ASL Info:	22/male/plainview
Elite Ratio:	4.8 - 180/80/69
Words:	70

Class/Type:	Poetry/Broken
Total Views:	582
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	424

Description:
old poem

hatred

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i loved you
but now i hate you
i let go of you and those damn feelings
...or have i?....
i contemplate on you sometimes
but...dont know why
how is it you wont let me forget?
i miss the times we had together
but you fucked up!
why?
i hate living this lie
saying i no longer love you
but then theres YOUR lies
that force me to hate you

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