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    dots Submission Name: hatreddots
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    Author: Thief
    ASL Info:    22/male/plainview
    Elite Ratio:    4.8 - 180/80/69
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Poetry/Broken
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    dotshatreddots
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    i loved you
    but now i hate you
    i let go of you and those damn feelings
    ...or have i?....
    i contemplate on you sometimes
    but...dont know why
    how is it you wont let me forget?
    i miss the times we had together
    but you fucked up!
    why?
    i hate living this lie
    saying i no longer love you
    but then theres YOUR lies
    that force me to hate you




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