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    dots Submission Name: Missin Herdots
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    Author: red_summer
    Elite Ratio:    2.68 - 17/26/51
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMissin Herdots
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    A secret usually is a secret for a reason
    But this secret, is a secret,
    Because if anyone should speak it
    to the person, or even breath it
    to the summer it'd be the end of that season

    Of course I speak
    In such a way because I plan to release
    Before mention piece
    Of information
    So that the sensation
    Of lies and deceit

    Will leave my brain
    Because I know that summer still has room for rain
    And I feel summers reign in every part of my brain
    So I rather be free than maintain
    Summer.
    I love you, I love you...
    And I love you again.




    Submitted on 2007-04-14 18:58:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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