roed of life -------------------------------------------
as i walk this path of life. And face it's joys and hardships. As it is not paved it is just a simple dirt road. As i walk it's twist and turns. And go up and down the hills of emotion.as so many befor me have. i've Walked down and up the hills. And thru the turns and twist. And gone thru the hardships and the joys "of the path of life"
good idea simple and clean languish so many people can relate to ..but I think you make little bet direct for a poetry ...I didn't say it's not good ..actually it get my attention to read and comment ..but I think you should give it more effort and you will have a very good poem here
PS .I have write some thing like this before call
melancholy II..see it and tell me what you think
Submission Name: roed of life
