i keep my memories of you
locked away in a drawer
i don't need them any more
but they're there
the old poems and letters
words you'll never hear
a fingerprint in the dust
i see your face
a familiar soul
in a sea of many
I agree 'fingerprint in the dust' is cliché. Try 'fingerprint on the soul' obviously this person is still erecting emotions, and it will probably be awhile before he/she leaves.
Feel like you need more to write on? Where is the key to this drawer? That would make it longer, but perhaps you don't wish to dwell on that subject.
lor]very good poem actually ..I can feel it you expires your self good hear ..but I think that
...'fingerprint in the dust' ....is little bet old I think you can come up with some thing more original
and the ending line was absolutely brilliant
a familiar soul
in a sea of many
very good I will see more of your work
I'm sure I will find a good stuff there
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