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    dots Submission Name: Gloomy day dots

    Author: LadyMerlina
    ASL Info:    24/ F/ Montreal
    Elite Ratio:    3.07 - 60/93/58
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsGloomy day dots

    Feeling hormonal and fragile
    Up is down, down is up
    I canít tell the difference
    Would just love for my mind to be silent.

    I take everything as an attack
    Want to strike back but find I canít
    I just stand there beside myself
    Looking in and out at my frail self,
    Noticing the imbalance
    between love, anger, hatred and regret.

    Up is down again.
    Would just love for my heart to be silent.
    The rage in me goes on, the anger it thrives
    Regret eats me up inside.

    While love hides away.
    Its brightness too bright for my gloomy day.

    Submitted on 2007-04-15 10:34:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      As a male I can't say I can feel your pain but also as a male who must deal with a female on a daily basis I can tell you that much I do understand.
    | Posted on 2007-04-15 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]

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