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    dots Submission Name: If one daydots

    Author: Nirvana
    ASL Info:    13/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 138/204/63
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/Death
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    dotsIf one daydots

    If one day you find
    That death has come for me
    Shed not too many tears,
    But smile joyfully
    For though my body is empty now
    And the void cannot be filled
    My soul is strong, Iím moving on
    But my mark will live on still
    Remember me with smiles
    And laugh if tears come to your eyes
    And donít forget, beloved ones
    I havenít truly died
    For I am there, in the rain,
    And in the flowers blooming fair
    I am in the trees and the wind
    Simply look; and find me there
    I am in the sunlight as it falls towards the earth
    I am in the moonlight too,
    In every death, in every birth
    Reach out in front of you
    And touch me once again
    And hold me like you used to
    When we were one back then

    Submitted on 2007-04-15 16:51:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This is so nice!!

    Im gonna add it to my fave,

    Once i died, i hope to be in heaven with God, be His messenger, just to visit earth frequently ;)

    Keep up the good work!!
    This is really something :)

    God Bless,
    | Posted on 2007-04-17 00:00:00 | by StylerDen | [ Reply to This ]

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