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    dots Submission Name: Why, oh why?dots
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    Author: Nirvana
    ASL Info:    13/f/USA
    Elite Ratio:    3.72 - 138/204/63
    Words: 207
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Inspired by my plan. Which is that i am going to buy out all the roses that i can find in at least seven supermarkets. Then i am going to the mall and giving them all away! because roses are nice


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    Why, oh why, must we fight so?
    Over stupid things, like peanut butter
    Who cares about peanut butter?
    When there are way more important things
    To be fighting for and against.

    Why, oh why, must we see only badness?
    When there is so much good in the world.
    The bus isnít ALWAYS late, it just seems that way.
    And people arenít ALWAYS horribleÖ
    Between you and me,
    I know a lot more nice people than mean ones.

    Why, oh why, do we hate so fast?
    When itís so much better to accept love
    (Only sometimes, of course!)
    Must we always dwell on what we donít like?
    Donít we have better things to think about?

    Why, oh why, would we wish the rain away
    When it makes the trees and flowers grow?
    You could simply make the most of it
    Laugh, and embrace its fall, spread joy
    To people who are grumpy and ill-tempered

    Why, oh why, donít we take time
    To do crazy things, like when we were five?
    Take a day off from work, buy a hundred roses
    And give them out to strangers!
    Make somebodyís day better, believe me,
    They wonít forget it.

    Why, oh whyÖ?




    Submitted on 2007-04-15 18:04:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I think peanut butter is very important.

    And I play in the rain (except when it's cold).

    And I like your poem...and your crazy plan.
    | Posted on 2007-04-16 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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