I don't care by just an angel

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Submission Name: I don't care dots

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Author:	just an angel
ASL Info:	17/F/FL
Elite Ratio:	3.89 - 95/109/59
Words:	122

Class/Type:	Poetry/Fuck it all
Total Views:	818
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	864

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I don't care dots

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I made a mistake
Forever to regret
My heart still breaks
I'll never forget

I hated it then
I hate it now
Never again
No way, no how

It hurts me today
Even more than before
I thought we were ok
Turns out I'm still a whore

You never forgave
My deadly sin
Yet I gave and gave
Showing how sorry I've been

You don't trust me!
But I trust you?'
It wasn't meant to be
But that's something I knew

I don't care anymore
I just don't care
Pin me to the floor
My feelings won't be there

So now I won't love
We'll just screw
Something I'm now proud of:
I'm just like you

Submitted on 2007-04-15 23:18:31 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Preety cool,

But some lines dosent really goes with the whole sequence, but i get how u feel, mistakes are inevitable, we all did something we dont want to, and regret later.. life i guess..

Overall, its a good poem,

God Bless
Dennis
| Posted on 2007-04-17 00:00:00 | by StylerDen | [ Reply to This ]

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