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    dots Submission Name: Estas Nox Noctis "Summer Night"dots

    Author: xingu32
    Elite Ratio:    2.04 - 9/18/36
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsEstas Nox Noctis "Summer Night"dots

    The stars and moon are out tonight
    Each and everyone glowing in the endless black backdrop
    The twisting of the lifeless trees in the summer breezes
    The wind gusts, rubbing tree on trees, branch on branch
    The creaking noises and the bruising sounds piercing the quite chilly night
    The few pops when branches break
    And fall like lifeless dolls to the ground, they fall
    The calling of owls, and the rustle of raccoons
    Each and every noise clear, underneath the moon and sky
    Wispy clouds roll past above me, they fade away
    Like when an old man puffs on a cigar, the smoke just fades away
    Falling asleep I miss the shooting stars and the howl of a tired old wolf

    Submitted on 2007-04-15 23:25:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hm... I like this. It's simple but true. Just a night outside. I love sleeping outdoors. The forest seems so different at night. Every sound seems amplified and light is broken by shadows. The poem is reall nice. Good work!
    | Posted on 2007-04-16 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]

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