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    dots Submission Name: Timedots

    Author: Fougene
    ASL Info:    17/m/Saskatoon Canada
    Elite Ratio:    4.57 - 23/22/39
    Words: 340
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 690
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    She stopped me, there and then -
    Her figure taunt and still,
    Frozen in mid-strut.
    Long, flowing auburn hair, shining
    like frozen fire.
    As I took my breath back,
    Her walk resumed.
    How slow the world seemed around her!

    Tell me now, the identity?
    The identity - of
    This time-altering beauty.

    How goddess-like her features were
    The blazing gaze of hazel eyes
    Bring me back to the days
    of bronze swords and tunics.
    As she walked through the streets:
    Head held high, long white dress trailing behind her,
    The crowd bows.

    Her enigmatic figure radiates beauty.
    The steady rhythm of her walk
    Patters me back to the age
    of classical music and romance.
    She would bow courteously,
    Dance graciously with extraordinary men,
    For she could very well be
    The fair queen of all England.

    Black holes? String theory?
    The only thing left in the world left unexplained
    Is the mystery of
    This time-altering beauty.

    Her gaze touched mine briefly,
    And I saw myself looking into the same two eyes,
    Standing at the altar, saying the words
    "I do."
    As I hold her hand, now a band of promise
    beaming back at me.
    Perhaps we would go to Venice for honeymoon.
    As we venture on a cruise,
    We hold each other in our arms.

    She smiled as she saw me
    - a beautiful crescent of the moon.
    Again, I saw that same smile that greeted me
    As I step into my house from work.
    There, Chloe and young Michael
    Pattering about my feet.
    And there was the third
    Within the gentle curve of her belly.
    I would tell her there lies a baby girl.
    She would believe in a boy instead.

    No one will ever be able to tell me
    How this time-altering beauty
    Changes the world when she's around me.
    No one could ever comprehend
    What she did to me:
    For she brought me back two thousand years,
    But I saw our future into eternity.

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