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    dots Submission Name: Justdots
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    Author: Kube
    ASL Info:    24/M/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 64/56/32
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsJustdots
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    Another mistake made what a surprise
    What makes this evil that I see
    What I think
    What I do
    Enough please
    When you think about it; itís just enough
    Please with every prayer
    Itís enough
    As said so many times to my own
    Give me the rest

    Another day dawns
    Another dream breaks
    Yet just a thought
    Just me
    Itís what I do
    What else am I
    I am all that is
    This is what is
    Just my thoughts

    Just the world.




    Submitted on 2007-04-16 06:24:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like it I hate it when you have a dream that you can't achieve.
    | Posted on 2007-04-16 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked it good work.

    ~Druecilla~
    | Posted on 2007-04-16 00:00:00 | by Druecilla | [ Reply to This ]


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