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    dots Submission Name: Nothing But...dots
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    Author: Kube
    ASL Info:    24/M/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 64/56/32
    Words: 142
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsNothing But...dots
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    We say it might be just to much
    Well ha!; To much it might may be
    It is the world remember that
    So many ways we could do this
    Let us run wild
    Let us fly beyond

    Does it not feel good?
    Let your wings grow full
    They may hurt but let them grow
    We shall fly my brothers; my sisters
    We shall fly

    We come above the oceans
    So high without any care
    Come with us; be our wings
    We are what they are not
    Let them be
    Let us be

    What has this light chosen for us and you/
    Death? Love? Sadness? Hate?
    Accept all
    It is me

    Fate I will fight thee
    Till death do we part
    Till death do I sleep
    I take your death
    I make it mine
    This is my war.




    Submitted on 2007-04-16 06:46:07     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      nice. this piece inspires me like crazy.

    | Posted on 2007-04-17 00:00:00 | by WD-40 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it.
    | Posted on 2007-04-16 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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