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    dots Submission Name: Thank You, Now Goodbye.dots
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    Author: BrokenAngel
    ASL Info:    19/F/MI
    Elite Ratio:    3.91 - 178/156/47
    Words: 230
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 225
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsThank You, Now Goodbye.dots
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    Do you remember that out of everything you said,
    You told me to remind you to never leave.
    But then there were all of the other things you said
    That made me wonder why.
    Your look still sends shockwaves down my spine—
    I hate myself for that.
    I don’t know why you’re no longer mine
    And for that I’m thankful.
    Someday I’ll come home again
    And you’ll probably be so far away
    I’ll be able to see what could have been
    And laugh quietly to myself.
    Of all the things that could have happened to you and me
    This is the one thing that was a surprise.
    There are times where I wish I could see
    What I really had meant to you.
    A glance from you sends a shock down my spine
    And I hate myself for that.
    I don’t know why you’re no longer mine
    And for that I’m thankful.
    The silly things that we used to say,
    The dreams that we made up,
    All the plans for when we went away.
    You stole a part of me
    That’s fighting to be free—
    I don’t care how long it takes.
    How can I still believe
    In a broken memory?
    Your glances still send a shock down my spine
    I still hate myself for that.
    I don’t care why you’re no longer mine
    And for that I’m thankful.




    Submitted on 2007-04-16 09:30:31     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      This poem is very different. I like how you can really feel the angst and the relief after she left him. It's really cool.
    Byeyahs
    Lizzy
    | Posted on 2007-04-16 00:00:00 | by Lizzy B | [ Reply to This ]



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