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    dots Submission Name: the word thesaurus sounds like a dinosaurdots
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    Author: wovenwords
    ASL Info:    19/F/Washington
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 108/303/189
    Words: 148
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 1553
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsthe word thesaurus sounds like a dinosaurdots
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    Disagreement;
    dissonance, discrepancy,
    conflict, dissension.

    NOUN
    we possess
    too much pride
    to retreat,
    and instead....
    envelop ourselves
    in opposition
    discordance
    discongruity.

    but I am enraptured by your...

    Mystery;
    enigma, obscurity.
    NOUN
    to depart--
    surely an option.
    but your
    puzzle, elusiveness,
    evasiveness

    keep me
    glued to the ground as does your...

    Endearment;
    affection, coquetry,
    flirtation, flattery.

    NOUN
    and though it
    is ever so rare,
    the scarcity of your
    kiss, embrace,
    touch

    cause me to...

    Forgive;
    excuse, remiss,
    indulge, reprieve.

    ADJ
    despite my reservations
    and minute amount
    of self-respect,
    my formerly strong dignity
    takes a sheepish fall
    as I spill words of
    exoneration,
    reconciliation,
    amnesty

    and fall back into...

    desire, attachment,
    passion, fondness, adoration,

    LOVE.




    Submitted on 2007-04-16 10:03:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      This is nice. It is like an grammar exercise of some sort. But I like the flow. I was listening and instrumental from Blackalicious and the piece really sounded nice on it. Considering your age this is an ok piece. Keep on building, someday your words will explode.
    | Posted on 2007-04-16 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow. I LOVE your use of the English language. This piece is completely breathtaking. I absolutely adore it. It is def. going in my favorites. I think I like it most for its originality. I have not read another poem quite like this one. I also love the way that each stanza flows into the next. It is so seemless. But under all the words and originality is this wonderful story. And the reason that I read this piece at all was the catchy title. I am a bit obsessed with dinosaurs. Wonderful... I don't really have anything else to say.
    LeAnna
    | Posted on 2007-04-16 00:00:00 | by RedRoseofBlood | [ Reply to This ]


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