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    dots Submission Name: The Lighthouse Keeper dots
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    Author: Guernica
    ASL Info:    17/male
    Elite Ratio:    2.87 - 77/114/67
    Words: 54
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsThe Lighthouse Keeper dots
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    I visited a lighthouse keeper who made his home upon the shore.
    And every night he'd shine his light for ships that came no more.
    And when I asked him if he knew his light was all in vain,
    He smiled, saying "It's worth it if just one tiny vessel came."




    Submitted on 2007-04-16 19:48:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      WOW this is cute! I like it, short and yet a story was told! Seriously I like it, all 4 lines in it Good job keep it up peace & stay safe...
    | Posted on 2007-04-17 00:00:00 | by Cordell | [ Reply to This ]
      very nice.. i would say this is just a little piece but its a feel good piece, which is very nice..
    | Posted on 2007-04-16 00:00:00 | by kristian | [ Reply to This ]


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