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    dots Submission Name: Peripheriesdots
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    Author: tagit
    ASL Info:    36 - Male - Canada
    Elite Ratio:    6.67 - 48/48/35
    Words: 92
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 66
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    The middle child was born
    With strong horns braced to battle
    Feelings that shout about life’s inequity

    A life that holds little middle ground
    Only a simple uncompromising strategy
    That demands push first or be pushed under

    A youthful desire to heal nature’s wounds
    Hardens into a tenacious oilfield trucker
    Predatorily controlling a cycle of patient hunts

    A life’s beginning removed to the Mile Zero
    A new existence under the biggest, bluest
    Umbrella skies that anyone could ever hope to see




    Submitted on 2007-04-16 23:37:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hint, hint... lol I take it you'd like to see the others in the series. Your wish is my command O' cryptic one.
    | Posted on 2007-06-06 00:00:00 | by tagit | [ Reply to This ]
      I am wondering how your poetry would express the firstborn and the lastborn child. That is something I would be interested in putting along side this poem to read. Hint, hint.
    | Posted on 2007-06-06 00:00:00 | by CrypticBard | [ Reply to This ]



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