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    dots Submission Name: Still Strongdots
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    Author: Cordell
    ASL Info:    36/M/Philadelphia P.A.
    Elite Ratio:    3.01 - 592/807/391
    Words: 157
    Class/Type: Poetry/Sorry
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    dotsStill Strongdots
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    The secrets just eating me up inside
    it gets harder for me to hide
    I had enough, I had it up to here
    there's only one way to make it disappear
    I know this will end our relationship
    let's just get it over with

    cheating on you
    this is what I been hiding
    sleeping with you
    I've been lying
    I don't know why
    I sit and cry
    if you never did wrong
    I don't know why
    I want to die
    hope our loves still strong

    You just never been there for me
    you rather be out in the streets
    hang out with your friends late nights
    leaving me home wasn't right

    cheating on you
    this is what I been hiding
    sleeping with you
    I've been lying
    I don't know why
    I sit and cry
    if you never did wrong
    I don't know why
    I want to die
    hope our loves still strong
    still strong...




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      wow very interesting... nice peice of work tho <3Britt
    | Posted on 2007-04-18 00:00:00 | by justkillme08 | [ Reply to This ]


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