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    dots Submission Name: My frienddots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 166
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Misc
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    dotsMy frienddots
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    She is the oddest girl I have ever seen.
    Yet I care for her unconditionally.
    She is my friend.
    The one shoulder on which I can cry.
    I know she feels the same.
    I trust her with my secrets.
    Those of desire and longing.
    She shares hers.
    I want to hold her close.
    To never let her shead a tear.
    In my arms of safety from the world.
    The world that tries to shun us.
    To make us feel low.
    Thats never going to happen.
    I won't let them get to me.
    Forget their stupidity.
    I don't want to hear it.
    I swear if you make her cry.
    You will wish that you could die.
    What we do does not affect you.
    Not in the smallest way.
    Keep your rumors to yourself
    and get the heck away.
    I don't want your pity.
    Thats the last thing that I need.
    I want for her to be happy.
    Even if that means your shunning me.




    Submitted on 2007-04-17 09:45:33     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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