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    dots Submission Name: Del-P(h)idots
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    Author: Non-Sens-Uality
    Elite Ratio:    2.94 - 67/80/53
    Words: 115
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    Of dust that lightens up the night,
    Are questions dim, caressing
    My eyes which seek a guiding light,
    My soul, a dreadful blessing.

    In numbers, abstracts dance through time
    Reversing and exploring,
    The strings -a harp -are words in line-
    A melody ignoring.

    Why are my thoughts a sea of sand?
    Why is my mind on fire?
    The sphinx had promised me a land-
    Symphony of desire...

    A being tangent to my heart,
    Sometimes a pulse of evil -
    Harmonic sound, demonic art,
    The ambigram - his symbol.

    An now, dear Pythia, I ask
    Longing for a decision,
    Who am I, from behind the mask?
    I fear I failed my mission...




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      There is something about this poem that feels very familar to me and perhaps thats why I love it so much. The concept and word choice here merge beautifully. I too adore Greek mythology and love reading old sonnets and poems. To me this felt like it was written with experience. The emotions are conveyed very well here.
    | Posted on 2007-04-17 00:00:00 | by Ishtar | [ Reply to This ]
      I dig this write and I just read a two book series dealing with a woman becoming the Pythia, but anyway, I like how you tied it all in this write. The title is what drew me in and the words are what kept me there, superb!!! I am a great lover of Greek mythology (should be called lore or stories, cause they have truth in them) and dig how you are appealing to the Pythia for answers.

    Ps: Caressing, just to let you know, 1 r n 2 s's.
    | Posted on 2007-04-17 00:00:00 | by Lil gal | [ Reply to This ]


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