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    dots Submission Name: She is...dots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 143
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Passion
    Total Views: 777
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 899



    Description:
       I'm so very confused sometimes.


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    dotsShe is...dots
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    She is the most interesting being I have met.
    I wouldn't trade her for anything.
    She is my closest allie.
    A very dear friend to me.
    She is viewed as an old ball.
    This causes people to dislike me.
    She is someone I care for.
    No one can chase me anyway.
    She is funny and unique.
    That is hard to come by.
    She is special.
    Unlike those other people.
    She is kind and sweet.
    It makes me want to hold her.
    Her parents don't agree.
    They try to keep her far away from me.
    I didn't understand.
    Why would they do such a thing.
    She likes me.
    I like her.
    What is there to disagree with?
    I don't understand.
    How could liking someone else be bad?

    Girls with girls, guys with guys, for some reason in her parents eyes it is bad.




    Submitted on 2007-04-17 10:01:54     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ........................................ okaies..... i like it alot. it makes sence to me... your feelings are confusing....
    | Posted on 2007-04-18 00:00:00 | by yamifox | [ Reply to This ]


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