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    dots Submission Name: The perfect man...dots
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    Author: pixie_007
    Elite Ratio:    3.36 - 45/77/63
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Story/
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       Its about a man,an important man that is still hoping to be found... [I think I might be recovering from the writer's block stump,forgive me if its not good... I tried.]


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    dotsThe perfect man...dots
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    He will walk with confidence
    and not stride with an ego.
    He will carry his dignity with content
    and his pride will be boldly highlighted

    He will always speak his mind
    and not be rude about it
    His opinion will always count
    for he will be a powerful man indeed

    His eyes will reflect pure envy
    because you will wish to be him
    His presence will radiate security
    and he will speak true loyalty

    Success will pour from within him
    with little or no effort at all
    he will be everything you wish to be
    As with everything and so much more...




    Submitted on 2007-04-17 13:34:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I understand what you mean. This makes me think of my man... ahh I'm so lucky! Hopefully you, too can find the man of your dreams.

    ~orange
    | Posted on 2007-04-19 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]


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