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The perfect man...
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Its about a man,an important man that is still hoping to be found... [I think I might be recovering from the writer's block stump,forgive me if its not good... I tried.]
The perfect man...
He will walk with confidence
and not stride with an ego.
He will carry his dignity with content
and his pride will be boldly highlighted
He will always speak his mind
and not be rude about it
His opinion will always count
for he will be a powerful man indeed
His eyes will reflect pure envy
because you will wish to be him
His presence will radiate security
and he will speak true loyalty
Success will pour from within him
with little or no effort at all
he will be everything you wish to be
As with everything and so much more...
Submitted on 2007-04-17 13:34:49
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I understand what you mean. This makes me think of my man... ahh I'm so lucky! Hopefully you, too can find the man of your dreams.
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