I like this type of structure and form......I use it myself quite often. The wording compliments the repitition and I really like how you linked everything together to enable the whole thing to flow i waves, wind, water, rainbow etc.....all lend to the outdoors and of course leads the reader to the glassy shores of love.
This poem, is structured, formed and worded superbly well.
This is mysterious, but is attractive in it's mystery, as love is a vast eternity, with many, many stories! "Love conquers all" they say, and "Love is All", I say! This is excellent, and is mysterious and intriguing! You have a talent for poetry and writing that is rare, lovely lady!