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    dots Submission Name: written across my wristdots
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    Author: DontLetGo421
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 118/238/141
    Words: 45
    Class/Type: Poetry/Angry
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    dotswritten across my wristdots
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    running after her
    you say your meant to be
    how do you expect me to feel?
    up to my eyes in glee?
    afraid of telling me the truth
    knowing i'd be pissed
    how do i feel ? read along
    its written across my wrist




    Submitted on 2007-04-17 16:17:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      i like it. a lot.
    | Posted on 2007-05-02 00:00:00 | by cbgurl413 | [ Reply to This ]
      oh geeze im going through this right now! thats strange. well, i like the way this is written. its short, simple, and to the point. That is rare in poetry these days, and I love it when I come across it. Good job.
    | Posted on 2007-04-17 00:00:00 | by Jessica Lynn | [ Reply to This ]


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