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    dots Submission Name: Dark Obsessiondots
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    Author: Ratmeat
    ASL Info:    25/M/Los Angeles
    Elite Ratio:    3.33 - 200/222/61
    Words: 261
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 136
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    dotsDark Obsessiondots
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    Lotions
    Tangerines
    Nipping the nose like frost-bite
    Rich brownie flowers
    Dive bombing the scent sensors
    Lotions

    Famine stirs restless through my cavity
    Suede vibrations echo through incinerating seconds

    Sade

    A slo-mo bass line swaggers
    And the purring saxophone golden
    Bats at my head and
    The electric sex string guitar is midnight
    And thump boom boom thump goes the drum
    And my thump boom heart pumps
    Backup enforcements to my south

    Sprawled before the mirror
    She murmurs falsetto R&B melodies
    Applies buttery white snow creams
    To her panther smooth nudeness

    Sweltering hot
    The heat gouges my pale olive pores
    Sending trails of sultry drops to be dispersed
    By shape shifting rays of god fire

    ...dink dink dink
    A synthesized Casio cowbell
    Leaves rhythmic footprints
    In my cranial arena
    The bass hits a climactic high E then
    Struts down to the low while sly sipping
    A glass of brandy

    Sweat

    There is a hunger
    Deep and constant
    Carnal carnivorous
    Historic
    Stemming before a spherical Earth
    Before Jesus was white

    This knowledge penetrates deep
    As I watch
    Poised
    Astonished with coiled rattler in chest
    Carefully timing my pounce
    Watching shadowed skin
    Absorbing the lotions
    In awe
    Shedding these black clothes
    Smelling and tasting
    The lotions




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