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    dots Submission Name: 7dots
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    Author: FallenAngelJC
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 47/53/41
    Words: 492
    Class/Type: Misc/Love
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    Everything moves, the world turns with life going forward,
    Reality is slowing...a blood drop falls from my finger,
    It ripples into the earth below me, echoing,
    The waves then shatter the world around me just like glass,
    Everything becomes a flash, memories to thought,
    With you...For you...I reveal 7...

    Sight,
    Light, breeze through my eyes, gentle and enchanting...
    It surrounds you, bathing your skin with its glow...
    Others reflect only but a firefly, while you shine like the full moon...
    Dazzling, like sparkles of diamond night, you embrace my sight...
    I've seen the world of beauty, for you are beautiful...

    Sound,
    Your beloved voice, no sound of the world can be sweeter...
    It echoes music through the halls of my soul...
    A Melody that only heaven can compose...
    Soothing to a storm within a heart...
    Can I not listen to it...

    Scent,
    To be close to breath in the touch of your skin, you scent...
    If in Eden, an eternity sprang forth the world's flowers...
    I could only breath in yours, a scent of deep desire...
    Your scent carries in whispers of the wind...
    Intoxicating and alluring to my senses...

    Taste,
    To taste your lips, its passion of fierce emotions...
    As if Lighting came forth and brought with its hury the storm...
    Together in its eye, would be no fear...
    A kiss that sets us beyond it, and beyond reality...
    The flavour of life itself...

    Touch,
    To be able to come close, to fire and flame...
    Silk would be coarsed and ashed wood, compare to your skin...
    Burning warmth that burns away my loneliness and sorrow...
    Your touch around me, and there would be no cold harshness in life...
    A touch that sets me free...

    Love,
    To be able to fall in love with you...
    5 senses bine, forged together and between...
    A love soo Forbidden, to be cast away...
    Upon a sky of Eternity, was a love, our love...
    A Dream...

    7,
    Has no name...
    But I lay here now, broken by you, the memories end...
    Without you comes the end and a 7th...
    Sight, Sound, Taste, Touch, and Scent...
    Each becoming incomplete, each becoming a torment...
    Love, of which I will not let go even in exile from your grace...
    Has 7 a name...? Of Sorrow...Of Grief...Of Pain...Of Hurt...

    The revelation ends, like a play it comes to a close,
    I see but fading light escape my world,
    But I wait, for one day you would find me here again,
    At an ending, for you are my beginning,
    Can you find me?
    Complete me once more...




    Submitted on 2007-04-17 23:33:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    Incredibly insightful. I find that your words make way for themselves to get under the readers skin. Also, I find this conception very intriguing as you really have a keen sense of style in poetry and the beauty of expression. I urge you to write as much as you can because you obviously have so much to offer.

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    | Posted on 2007-07-05 00:00:00 | by Porcelaine | [ Reply to This ]
      Ok I never comment on love poems really,,,, but I had to give into temptation, pardon the pun...
    But really that’s beautiful, it really is.
    Much feeling in that.
    Sorry I can’t leave a long comment, how do you comment on perfection.
    Yeah you’re really good.
    Take care.
    Hugs Di
    | Posted on 2007-04-18 00:00:00 | by Andz | [ Reply to This ]



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