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    dots Submission Name: pleaddots
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    Author: myonlysalvation
    Elite Ratio:    2.11 - 41/48/42
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotspleaddots
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    and if there was a way
    i would find a way
    and maybe if i wasnt killing myself
    more and more
    i would stay.

    trying to find a link
    a pathway
    through this hell
    trying to find
    some answer
    .some kind of truth.

    but ive just been lying to myself
    all of this time. this sacred time.
    is it just wasted time?
    maybe, there is no answer
    and just one way out.

    time ive spent crying
    bleeding my eyes right out
    but tears do not join me. my eyes have been sucked dry.

    and you ,,,
    just
    drag me down.

    trying to find a link
    a pathway
    through this hell
    trying to find an answer
    something that lies within you.

    but ive just been killing myself
    all of this time. this sacred time.
    trying to save you.
    is this all just wasted time?
    when there is no answer
    and just one way out.




    (far beyond empty.
    and still dreaming)




    Submitted on 2007-04-18 03:12:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      damn, this really does seem like hell. i dunno what to say except hope it all works out better for you, truly.

    zd
    | Posted on 2007-04-24 00:00:00 | by zen-dog | [ Reply to This ]


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