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    dots Submission Name: become your exdots
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    Author: DontLetGo421
    Elite Ratio:    2.18 - 118/238/141
    Words: 139
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotsbecome your exdots
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    and just like that i'm gone
    out of your life forever
    i say i'm living in the present
    to be in the past, never

    what we had, it was true
    atleast that way to me
    if only you could s t o p
    and maybe you could see

    just like every other love
    i'm right back into this dump
    i wish that i could just talk with you
    but when i try, my throat begins to lump

    why did you choose her?
    what does she have that i dont
    i've said too many times 'i'll get over it'
    but this time, no i wont

    i guess you never took a chance
    to know me, what you wanted was sex
    i was willing, but we never made the time
    so you decided i'd become your ex




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    ||| Comments |||
      its a shame that guys are pathetic in that way
    its not all about the sex
    and sometimes waiting for the girl to be ready make is more special
    ohwell in the end its his loss
    love stacey
    | Posted on 2007-07-10 00:00:00 | by AngelinDisguise | [ Reply to This ]
      plenty more fish in the sea, as they say... hope you find someone a lot nicer... after all, it's not that nice that they only wanted you for sex...

    zd
    | Posted on 2007-04-24 00:00:00 | by zen-dog | [ Reply to This ]


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