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    dots Submission Name: Unspoken Lawsdots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Depressed
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    dotsUnspoken Lawsdots
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    Clean the kitchen.
    You spare my arm.

    Mow the law.
    I can keep my legs.

    Do as you say.
    I donít get a black eye.

    Show you affection.
    You use it against me.

    Steal you cigarettes.
    I get burned.

    Speak out against you.
    You make me wish you would kill me.

    Come with you to poker night.
    You let them hurt me.

    Wonít let anyone see the burns, the bruises.
    You get worse.

    I start to cry.
    You hit harder.

    Tell you that I love you.
    You laugh and take me to that mans house.

    Threaten to tell.
    You get a club.

    Call the cops.
    You tell them itís a prank.

    You bloody me up.
    I go to the hospital.

    You pretend that you care.
    We get home and you start over.

    Ask you why.
    You say ĎYouíll be thankful in the long run.í




    Submitted on 2007-04-18 09:36:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awwww. I like dis one to. I can relate. ^_^ Smile i know its hard.

    Love~~ Serinity Blade
    | Posted on 2007-04-19 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
      Please tell me that this was not written from your life. God Bless You!
    | Posted on 2007-04-18 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ]
      God Bless You.
    | Posted on 2007-04-18 00:00:00 | by numbertwenty | [ Reply to This ]


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