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    dots Submission Name: I can't...dots

    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsI can't...dots

    I canít do anything right.
    I canít do everything wrong.
    I canít let you get away.
    I canít hold you close.
    I canít close my eye and go away.
    I canít have a happy place.
    I canít help my mom.
    I canít be anyone else.
    I canít trust anyone.
    I canít love again.
    I canít rebuild my wall.
    I canít make you see me.
    I canít remain invisible.
    I canít understand you.
    I canít smile.
    I canít stop crying.
    I canít deal with this.
    I canít be like them.
    I canít stand rumors
    I canít heal anything.
    I canít grow anything.
    I canít think straight.

    I can be me and those that canít accept that oh well.

    Submitted on 2007-04-18 09:39:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      There was once a time I thought I couldn't either...>.< I hope you feel better, but it's a good write
    | Posted on 2007-09-18 00:00:00 | by Lil Sere | [ Reply to This ]
      Very nice...I wrote a poem like that a while ago too
    | Posted on 2007-05-16 00:00:00 | by ZaiakuSin | [ Reply to This ]
      i like the fact that you staied honest and that is a quality alot of people don't have.
    | Posted on 2007-04-20 00:00:00 | by draconus | [ Reply to This ]
      Damn Straight. I like this poem so i am adding it to my favs. Damn Straight.
    | Posted on 2007-04-19 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
      I like the i cant i cant i cant but i can be me :)
    And the ending is interesting when i read it i expected something i cant live this life or something like that but the end was unexpected but good...
    | Posted on 2007-04-18 00:00:00 | by Bleeding death | [ Reply to This ]
      still doing great. Keep in touch!
    | Posted on 2007-04-18 00:00:00 | by Depression420 | [ Reply to This ]
      that is a good one but some of the things you said you cant do a sane person should so whats the problem but i like the fact that no matter what happens you still remain you and i will still be me KUDOS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    | Posted on 2007-04-18 00:00:00 | by kingsley | [ Reply to This ]
      that was very interesting..... when i see you i'll give you a hug!!!!
    | Posted on 2007-04-18 00:00:00 | by yamifox | [ Reply to This ]

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