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    dots Submission Name: Helios Forgottendots
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    Author: CynicalxDreamer
    ASL Info:    31/m/7th Level of Hell
    Elite Ratio:    2.46 - 40/100/64
    Words: 154
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 1216
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1002



    Description:
       I wrote this awhile back...I kinda even forgot I had it in my documents. But here it is. I wouldn't call it my best but its from the perspective of a Corax (wereraven for those not in the know) who had fallen from Helios' grace. So, here we go...


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    dotsHelios Forgottendots
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    At one time, I thought I could walk the same path
    That living in the light was my place
    But long ago, I turned my eye from Helios
    And turned my eyes to the shadow

    I live in the darkness, watching the night
    Walking the streets forgotten
    And standing where the sun doesn't shine
    Forgotten by the light

    Am I a noble warrior or guardian?
    No...I'm a coward who gave in
    I walk the solitary road of twilight
    Because I couldn't fight

    I couldn't make myself smile
    I couldn't struggle to stay happy
    All I could was give in to the sadness
    And let the despair overtake me

    Do I still fight alone in the dark?
    Yes...but no longer for hope
    I fight because of selfish reasons
    I'm not a murder, I'm just one bird

    And this little tree of darkness...

    ...is just meant for little ol' me.




    Submitted on 2007-04-18 14:12:58     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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