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    dots Submission Name: Happy Hump Day Haikus =)dots

    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Haiku/Love
    Total Views: 615
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       Love,Peace,Joy,Blessings & SMILES to share

    Many gracious thank you's ES

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    dotsHappy Hump Day Haikus =)dots

    Chill winds awaken
    selfless sensibility
    Blue skies white clouds

    Butterfly Freedom
    In reflection of ALL LOVE
    Winged Peace flight

    Spring hued blossom
    Eclectic voice of Divine
    Vibrations of Life

    Frequency Smiles
    not in time or in miles

    "Can't keep my eyes from the circling skies," Pink Floyd

    Submitted on 2007-04-18 20:40:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Hmm, what do these have to do with humping? Am I missing something? The closest I could get was maybe masterbation, but even that's a stretch. Not much for hiakus, but I figures if anyone could do em you could. I did an experiment with em, awhile ago. But this is better!
    | Posted on 2007-05-23 00:00:00 | by dismentled | [ Reply to This ]
      i just love haiku, and these are refreshing. i'm just sitting here enjoying a beautiful spring evening, and these make me smile. i especially like the butterfly one, "Winged Peace flight."
    that's a beautiful image.

    very nice, ladyshines!

    | Posted on 2007-04-20 00:00:00 | by magnicat | [ Reply to This ]
      I can't claim to be remotely expert in the world of haikus but I can tell you that you have captured some pleasant thoughts and images in these pieces. Personally I am far too verbose to ever find success in this medium.
    | Posted on 2007-04-19 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      i swear... you are the coolest. i lvoe it.... only a lot. wow


    *sorry for the lameass comment... just to let you know i read it and that i still love everything you write***
    | Posted on 2007-04-18 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]

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