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    dots Submission Name: Life Interrupteddots

    Author: The Gadfly
    ASL Info:    52/M/Moreno Valley, CA
    Elite Ratio:    3.55 - 1048/1348/375
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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       In memory of 32 souls at Virgina Tech.

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    dotsLife Interrupteddots

    No human could relieve the pain
    of this life interrupted.
    None could foresee disaster
    on the doorstep of this sunny day.

    An angry knock fell like lightning bolts
    and echoed peals of furious thunder,
    shreading fragile threads of fabric,
    pouring wrath upon a makeshift altar.

    A sacrifice of the unwilling prey,
    offered by a self-righteous predator
    to the Prince of this Earth
    in a feeding frenzy of selfishness.

    A cold wind hastens the day of reckoning,
    but not in the wake of warm sorrow.
    No human could relieve the pain
    of this life interrupted.

    The Gadfly

    Submitted on 2007-04-19 01:02:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      One word..
    "Kudos" ;)
    Love this write!!
    Keep the writes coming ;)

    God Bless,
    | Posted on 2007-04-22 00:00:00 | by StylerDen | [ Reply to This ]
      Not much to say except you nailed it. Keep writing.

    --crimson echo
    | Posted on 2007-04-20 00:00:00 | by crimson echo | [ Reply to This ]
      Great tribute to innocent humans who lost their lives in this massacre cause of the insanity of an atrocious predator. May God give peace to all the departed souls.
    | Posted on 2007-04-19 00:00:00 | by Ramneet | [ Reply to This ]
      It saddens me to know that the words of this piece ring so true. Such a waste.
    | Posted on 2007-04-19 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
    | Posted on 2007-04-19 00:00:00 | by Andz | [ Reply to This ]

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