Description: i know its repetitive and i normally hate that but so much on my mind is like an echo and i hate it this poem has nothing to do with what im thinking but i cant stand to have it on my mind, so here is is and now i feel so much better, i hope this wont stop you from commenting because i really want to know what people think.
this would be a great song, it has a great flow to it and it would be really catchy! I would add some breaks in the thought in between the stanzas, to show the longing and desire. Overall, lovely poem!
All the best, Steff