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    dots Submission Name: happy thingsdots
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    Author: Mr.Ordinary
    ASL Info:    21/M/Navy
    Elite Ratio:    3.17 - 64/102/41
    Words: 167
    Class/Type: Misc/Happy
    Total Views: 888
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 879



    Description:
       i like emailing things like this to my freinds we used to do this back and forth but my freinds have stopped and i dont know why, oh well i can still make up usless trhings for my owwn entertainment


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    dotshappy thingsdots
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    the frogs of kings past are then forgotten by the witches seen.

    when the last moon of lunal sufice is in the wane.

    but only if you insist on letting the last cat on nepar eat the queens precious mushroom in which she gave birth to the first brother of atea.

    the echo grass in which i sit was once a feild of willow pads, but it was eaten by the great flood of the sky.

    people dont think about the last of the beggining in such a way the they understand that it is really the end of the all in the last of the first.

    this throey is true but onyl in may whaen the flower of eden grow with the blue lilly's form hadies.

    given this is true then i have forgoten of the kings frogs and they must have their dinner so that the universe will not colapse due to the liking of the pig in green.




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      By all the beigns and powers, thsi is perplexing, and I could read the necronomicon. I feel that some message about either the great wheel or the cycle of power is hidden here.

    Or possibly you crafted a verbal rorschach that reveals what the reader is thinking. Then again, that's what some people say all writing is about.
    | Posted on 2007-05-31 00:00:00 | by Ignis Fatuus | [ Reply to This ]
      this was nice. i liked it even though it ha almost no organization. im not organized anyway.
    | Posted on 2007-05-24 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      we did this when we met... lovely
    watch some misspellings on the second to last set of sentences.
    i like it tons though!
    especially May, and your juxtaposition of words
    | Posted on 2007-04-19 00:00:00 | by tennisfuzz | [ Reply to This ]
      this is deep...wow!
    | Posted on 2007-04-19 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]


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