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    dots Submission Name: 13 yearsdots
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    Author: kapri49
    ASL Info:    16/f/canada
    Elite Ratio:    2.55 - 31/69/30
    Words: 201
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 817
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       This isn't great but it gets the point a cross...any and all comments are appreciated :D


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    For years and years you stayed hidden
    For 13 years you kept your world away from mine
    You told me you did it for me
    You said you would have given anything
    To see my smiling face

    It took me ten years
    To learn there was something missing
    And 3 more to find it

    You came filled with promises
    With all the tools you needed
    To build my hope and happiness
    And then tear it down again

    I took what little trust I had
    And bet it all on you
    I told myself that after 13 years
    You would have changed
    I told myself you cared

    For a while you did
    You cared, you changed
    But it was short lived
    And as real as your promises

    3 years later, I never see you
    All I've got to know your still breating
    Is your money and your son
    And sometimes I wish you'd stop.

    I waited to long, I tried to hard
    You'll never be my everything
    You'll never take control

    You may be old and wise
    But I am wiser still.
    I'm wise enough to know,
    That the daughter
    Shouldn't take control...




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