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    dots Submission Name: Nubbinsdots
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    Author: RedRoseofBlood
    ASL Info:    19/f/outsideyourwindow
    Elite Ratio:    3.34 - 592/582/135
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1075
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 631



    Description:
       About a man who feels so insecure about himself because he was mentally abused by his mother.


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    Long, elegant fingers stride quickly,
    Along the black and white keys.
    You look longingly upon them,
    They resemble your mother's hands.
    Why did you have to take after your father?

    Mommy never liked Daddy,
    It was all a farce.
    You were just caught in the middle.

    All you were looking for was innocent, strong loving.
    But what good is trying to play the great instrument,
    If all you have are nubbins?

    And now here you sit,
    In front of her.
    It is your chance to shine,
    But all you can think of is your mother.




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