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    dots Submission Name: blatentdots
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    Author: in shadow
    ASL Info:    19/F/ nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 531/223/75
    Words: 52
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 174
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    all i want to do
    is find myself comfortably
    in the center of attention
    just work around me
    ashlee slept with mikey
    and megan slept with brad
    oh no i've let the secret out
    will anyone get mad
    does any of this really matter
    does any one really care




    Submitted on 2007-04-19 13:18:08     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow. i think i read this b4. very decent. I won't give u a second critique on it I'll move to something else
    | Posted on 2008-03-12 00:00:00 | by AeThe Lost Poet | [ Reply to This ]
      Ahhhh,a nice little read.I think gossip is just to amuse ourselves because otherwise things would be boring.No one actually cares though as you say.That picture is really cool also...

    -Craig

    | Posted on 2007-04-22 00:00:00 | by Raphael | [ Reply to This ]
      I like your poem,
    and you have a nice pic.
    your a pretty good poet,
    and thats the trick.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2007-04-19 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
      So true. People react way too hard on things that are so little. ( I know I'm probably being a hippocrite there though.) Good wrtie.

    <3 Julia
    | Posted on 2007-04-19 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]
      lol really nice one
    is a certain someone supose to read it? lol jkjk
    just DeeDs
    | Posted on 2007-04-19 00:00:00 | by crazymunchkin | [ Reply to This ]


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