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    dots Submission Name: part of a story i am writingdots
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    Author: draconus
    ASL Info:    23/MALE/UK
    Elite Ratio:    1.89 - 49/101/59
    Words: 218
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotspart of a story i am writingdots
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    May the Gods of vallhala forgive me as i take the plunge to ever lasting death, and may they protect me for the jorney i have to make. The time for action is now and i will fight fo what is true and right. Help me great sprit of the sky as I am now in your hands. Protect me from evil as i fight for you freedom to roam in the afterlife..... Help me make the deathly blow to evil.
    ok we will stop at that bit or you will not know what i was going on about. you probably know that Vallhala is the viking word for heaven and that the great sprit of the sky refers to two diferent sprits. Eagore and Horas. wait of corse you don't how stupid am i. i'm sorry i will start with me.
    my name is woart and i love the book world. the magical moments that inspire people to read on and the power of the words in your head make you imagine giants and elves and pixies. you get the picture. my dream was to write a book and, well here it is.
    my adventure started with




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      cool... i like reading stories about elves and gods...

    keep writing... it'll all come together the more you write...

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    | Posted on 2007-04-24 00:00:00 | by zen-dog | [ Reply to This ]
      this is very very good keep writing i would like to see more
    | Posted on 2007-04-20 00:00:00 | by SkinnyWhiteBoy | [ Reply to This ]


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