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    dots Submission Name: GRRRRRRdots
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    Author: Katlord
    ASL Info:    24/no thanks/my room
    Elite Ratio:    2.17 - 375/199/101
    Words: 65
    Class/Type: Rant/Venting
    Total Views: 680
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 438



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       I hate my health class.


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    I can't stand makeup.
    Don't treat me like an out cast.

    Makeup is pointless.
    Beauty come from with in.

    Or at least that's what I thought.
    Stupid, stupid self absorbed chicks.

    One day they will realize.
    Nothing they do or say matters to anyone.

    NOT even their stupid freinds.
    They just tell them it does to make them feel wanted.




    Submitted on 2007-04-20 09:33:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      this is very ture i know im aguy but and what do guys know but we know lots your right let opeopel except you for who you are and dont pretend to be some on your not . keep writing this was great
    | Posted on 2007-04-20 00:00:00 | by SkinnyWhiteBoy | [ Reply to This ]
      It's true. But don't worry, because they all end up either living in a trailer with a eight kids by as many fathers or rich but totally alcoholic, with a cocaine habit to boot. I sympathise with your rant. Or I used to. Now I don't have to be around those people. (And I've grown to like makeup quite a bit, too )
    | Posted on 2007-04-20 00:00:00 | by Abby Sinthetic | [ Reply to This ]


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