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    dots Submission Name: Judgements Made By Strangersdots
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    Author: Poetic_tragedy6
    ASL Info:    25/F/OR
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 114/153/74
    Words: 42
    Class/Type: Poetry/Being a Teen
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    dotsJudgements Made By Strangersdots
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    Judgements.
    Ever so calling me names.
    Failing me.
    Putting me to shame.
    A few scars.
    Here and there.
    Leave them looking everywhere.
    Stares.
    Whispers.
    Like I'm not there.
    Judgements.
    Hurt like a knife.
    But who are they,
    To judge my life?




    Submitted on 2007-04-20 14:49:27     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I like it. I just thought it was missing something. It was good though. Well keep on writing.
    | Posted on 2007-04-21 00:00:00 | by bleeding_sin | [ Reply to This ]
      WOW! So short yet, so powerful. I love poems like this! You don't need a 400 word poem to make a great statement. Very nice work on this!
    Judgements...hurt like a knife,
    You hit that nail on the head! My guess is your one of the strange like myself. Well, nice to meet you! Again GREAT JOB!
    Beautiful yet, Corrupted,
    Dominique
    | Posted on 2007-04-21 00:00:00 | by DearlyDeparted | [ Reply to This ]


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