Write Goodbye on my Grave -------------------------------------------
Goodbye.
It really is forever isn't it?
Goodbyes
Leave my heart in a painful fit.
Goodbye
Is all everyone says.
Goodbye
Leaves me wanting to be dead.
Goodbye
Without a reason why.
Goodbye
Leaving me to cry.
Goodbye
When I want to say hello.
Goodbye
It's all I'll ever know.
Goodbye
Don't say that please!
Goodbye
It's killing me....
It is good. I understand it but it seems as though you forced it from your heart. But I like the way it was layed out. And you could have used more discriptive words. But good one. Keep on writing.
Submission Name: Write Goodbye on my Grave
